New story posted (original submission)

Started by Tarx, February 26, 2008, 11:20:45 AM

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February 26, 2008, 11:20:45 AM
http://www.armageddon.org/original/showSubmission.php?submission=340

I thought this was a great read (still reading it) and I think everyone else should read it too.
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February 26, 2008, 11:37:28 AM #1
Great story, but the quotes need better formatting.
February 26, 2008, 11:42:29 AM #2 Last Edit: February 26, 2008, 11:44:11 AM by Ghost
Not my fault, it looked fine to me before submitting

EDIT:  And be gentle.  There may be issues with grammar or structure, I am not a native speaker.
some of my posts are serious stuff
February 26, 2008, 12:47:30 PM #3
I like your writing style, Ghost. I can't wait for the book, Armageddon written by: Ghost  Cover illustrations by: Ourla, Biscuits, and Silverfaune
February 26, 2008, 01:18:40 PM #4
Excellent job, Ghost. Great read.  ;D
February 26, 2008, 03:00:57 PM #5
(Edited by Ourla, too)

It still rules, Ghost.
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February 26, 2008, 03:43:41 PM #6
Right.  So if there is any grammar issues, you know who to blame (Ourla)
some of my posts are serious stuff
February 26, 2008, 06:46:23 PM #7
Excellent story. I love the quotes.
"You will have useful work: the destruction of evil men. What work could be more useful? This is Beyond; you will find that your work is never done -- So therefore you may never know a life of peace."

~Jack Vance~
February 26, 2008, 06:56:05 PM #8
Cameos for everyone!
February 26, 2008, 07:14:36 PM #9
Sweet...I was part of one of those quotes....a long while back...and it was hilarious...
Respect. Responsibility. Compassion.
February 26, 2008, 11:09:28 PM #10
"-You's got six words to tell me how you's gonna make dat shit square... roughin up a fucker westside when you's ain' got no colors on you's.  Six motherfuckin words..  Say dem now.
-  You can have all my sid!"
                                                                                           - Quick, after catching someone in the wrong place

Hahaha.   Oh Quick.
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February 26, 2008, 11:26:04 PM #11
Quote from: mansa on February 26, 2008, 11:09:28 PM
"-You's got six words to tell me how you's gonna make dat shit square... roughin up a fucker westside when you's ain' got no colors on you's.  Six motherfuckin words..  Say dem now.
-  You can have all my sid!"
                                                                                           - Quick, after catching someone in the wrong place

Hahaha.   Oh Quick.


       " - Look at my son!  Is not he cute?

-   I can snap his neck with two fingers.

-   And I can remove your balls and stuff them down your throat.

-   Good point"

         

                                                - Gin of the Alleys, and Inrof

This ones better... Best. Quote. Ever.
"Don't take life too seriously, nobody ever makes it out alive anyway."
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