Tuluk documentation updates

Started by Nyr, February 17, 2014, 01:35:13 PM

What You Know -> Tuluk may need some slight update.

http://armageddon.org/help/view/Tuluk%20Details
New Players Guide: http://gdb.armageddon.org/index.php/topic,33512.0.html


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Quote from: mansa on March 14, 2014, 01:35:17 PM
What You Know -> Tuluk may need some slight update.

http://armageddon.org/help/view/Tuluk%20Details

Can you be more specific?
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Quote from: Nyr on March 13, 2014, 10:15:10 PM
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Quote from: tortall on March 13, 2014, 04:53:48 PM
The part on "Regions of Tuluk" lists for Vineyard and Vineyards. I understand one was one the enterable area that was once south of Tuluk, if memory serves. Having two things of a similar name would be confusing to new players though I think.... And from reading them they're basically the same thing with different descriptions?


Yes. One was created for the region page and one was not. They can probably be combined.

Fixed!  Now there is only one.

Also fixed the typo on the Uaptal page since it is open.

Nyr, you can now stand Uaptal and proud for that.   ;)
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I started reading through the Tuluki House helps in game... I'm not sure if they are the same as the website ones. But on the in game help file for House Dasari it states that they maintain close relationships with both orders of the templarate or something like that. Since there aren't two orders anymore this should be corrected.
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I reread the article, http://armageddon.org/help/view/Tuluk%20Details , and I guess my brain skipped the very last line in the article about the templars becoming one branch.  Dang brain.

Other than that, I had a slight recommendation:


Tuluk Details

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Society:
You probably grew up in an apartment or tenement in the labyrinthine Warrens, the commoner housing quarter in the southwestern part of the city. You are probably a commoner and therefore wear the traditional Tuluki tattoos that denote your caste, including the tattooed neck band that all citizens of Gol Krathu sport, and the six-pronged star on the hand that shows you are a commoner.

*** I would add in a link to the tattoo section here, or at least mention that tattoos is how the city keeps track of citizens, or something to help the new people understand how important tattoos are. ***



Other than that I think it's up to snuff!
New Players Guide: http://gdb.armageddon.org/index.php/topic,33512.0.html


Quote from: Morgenes on April 01, 2011, 10:33:11 PM
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