http://www.armageddon.org/original/showSubmission.php?submission=340
I thought this was a great read (still reading it) and I think everyone else should read it too.
			
			
			
				Great story, but the quotes need better formatting.
			
			
			
				Not my fault, it looked fine to me before submitting
EDIT:  And be gentle.  There may be issues with grammar or structure, I am not a native speaker.
			
			
			
				I like your writing style, Ghost. I can't wait for the book, Armageddon written by: Ghost  Cover illustrations by: Ourla, Biscuits, and Silverfaune
			
			
			
				Excellent job, Ghost. Great read.  ;D
			
			
			
				(Edited by Ourla, too)
It still rules, Ghost.
			
			
			
				Right.  So if there is any grammar issues, you know who to blame (Ourla)
			
			
			
				Excellent story. I love the quotes.
			
			
			
				Cameos for everyone!
			
			
			
				Sweet...I was part of one of those quotes....a long while back...and it was hilarious...
			
			
			
				"-You's got six words to tell me how you's gonna make dat shit square... roughin up a fucker westside when you's ain' got no colors on you's.  Six motherfuckin words..  Say dem now.
-  You can have all my sid!"
                                                                                           - Quick, after catching someone in the wrong place
Hahaha.   Oh Quick.
			
			
			
				Quote from: mansa on February 26, 2008, 11:09:28 PM
"-You's got six words to tell me how you's gonna make dat shit square... roughin up a fucker westside when you's ain' got no colors on you's.  Six motherfuckin words..  Say dem now.
-  You can have all my sid!"
                                                                                           - Quick, after catching someone in the wrong place
Hahaha.   Oh Quick.
       " - Look at my son!  Is not he cute?
-   I can snap his neck with two fingers.
-   And I can remove your balls and stuff them down your throat.
-   Good point"         
                                                - Gin of the Alleys, and Inrof
This ones better... Best. Quote. Ever.