http://www.armageddon.org/original/showSubmission.php?submission=325
Looks good, Ghost!
			
			
			
				I chase Ghost but I can't catch Ghost.
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				Special thanks to Ourla for grammar check.
And to Barzalene, for her help when I got stuck.
			
			
			
				That was pretty sweet. Nice job Ghost.
			
			
			
				Very good story. Props to you, Ghost.
			
			
			
				Quote from: Ghost on December 25, 2007, 02:19:11 PM
Special thanks to Ourla for grammar check.
And to Barzalene, for her help when I got stuck.
I CHECKED THE PROLOGUE, BASTARD.
			
 
			
			
				Very, very good. Thanks for writing that, Ghost.
			
			
			
				Quote from: Mood on December 25, 2007, 03:33:38 PM
I CHECKED THE PROLOGUE, BASTARD.
Haha, I was expecting this
			
 
			
			
				That was a wonderful read.  Kudos, Ghost!
			
			
			
				Excellent.
			
			
			
				I enjoyed it.
			
			
			
				Did you quote a Magic card there, Ghost?
			
			
			
				Quote from: jstorrie on December 26, 2007, 01:35:36 AM
Did you quote a Magic card there, Ghost?
It is something stuck in my head from years ago.  I don't remember where it came now.  Could be magic card, or a book?  Can't say for sure.
By the way, thanks everyone
			
 
			
			
				(http://www.distrimagic.com/images/Black%20Knight%203.jpg)
Straight from the ol 'Ritual, Ritual, Knight, Necropotence' days.
			
			
			
				Kudos! I demand more story now!
			
			
			
				I like it.  Well-written.
			
			
			
				Ghost - awesome job.  Really made me hunger for more.
			
			
			
				Nice story.
Were Lord Templar Sulach and his soldiers PCs, though?  I know some of the other characters were.
			
			
			
				No, most of them are fictional.
This is about the time Allanak was building/reforming the forts, I think it was around 2004-2005.  During that time there were a lot of plots evolved around campaigns in the tablelands, and many more political plots.  I shamelessly took the liberty of using some of the names involved in the plots, but they are only names. Because I did not get to know the PCs well enough to take their personality.
			
			
			
				I enjoyed reading this. Can't wait to see more.
			
			
			
				Quote from: jstorrie on December 26, 2007, 05:48:58 AM
(http://www.distrimagic.com/images/Black%20Knight%203.jpg)
Straight from the ol 'Ritual, Ritual, Knight, Necropotence' days.
"It's just a flesh wound."