Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two

[Nyr]

Something that really impressed me about this submission is that almost every line of dialogue, from every character, has an emote appended to it. It has inspired me to try and step up my game.

I love seeing that.  When it happens that often and isn't just repeated/trope stuff (terribly guilty of that myself), I find myself really enjoying the read!

[wizturbo]

Don't be such a stickler, Nyr. This thread as been amazing.

Yep.  Hopefully as encouragement for people to work on their own original submissions rather than discuss here in lieu of doing so.

If I can find my old hard drive, I will dig up some logs to contribute!

[Beethoven]

I would submit my old logs if I had any.

[boog]

more submissions are a good thing.


Something that really impressed me about this submission is that almost every line of dialogue, from every character, has an emote appended to it. It has inspired me to try and step up my game.

Thanks, pookie.

[Case]

more submissions are a good thing.


Something that really impressed me about this submission is that almost every line of dialogue, from every character, has an emote appended to it. It has inspired me to try and step up my game.

Thanks, pookie.

Crack a wife. Oh she wished.

[Barzalene]

My pc had a crush on Darcy. He didn't have the stones to take on Dowan though. And too, he respected Dowan.