Author Topic: Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two  (Read 5488 times)

Nyr

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Re: Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two
« Reply #50 on: October 16, 2014, 01:52:30 PM »
Something that really impressed me about this submission is that almost every line of dialogue, from every character, has an emote appended to it. It has inspired me to try and step up my game.

I love seeing that.  When it happens that often and isn't just repeated/trope stuff (terribly guilty of that myself), I find myself really enjoying the read!
Paint on a mustache and be a dude for a day. Stuff some melons down my shirt, cinch up a corset and pass as a girl.

With appropriate roleplay of course.

wizturbo

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Re: Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two
« Reply #51 on: October 16, 2014, 01:53:59 PM »
Don't be such a stickler, Nyr. This thread as been amazing.

Yep.  Hopefully as encouragement for people to work on their own original submissions rather than discuss here in lieu of doing so.

If I can find my old hard drive, I will dig up some logs to contribute!

Beethoven

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Re: Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two
« Reply #52 on: October 16, 2014, 01:55:41 PM »
I would submit my old logs if I had any.

boog

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Re: Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two
« Reply #53 on: October 18, 2014, 12:40:14 AM »
more submissions are a good thing.


Something that really impressed me about this submission is that almost every line of dialogue, from every character, has an emote appended to it. It has inspired me to try and step up my game.

Thanks, pookie.
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Case

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Re: Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two
« Reply #54 on: October 18, 2014, 05:25:13 AM »
more submissions are a good thing.


Something that really impressed me about this submission is that almost every line of dialogue, from every character, has an emote appended to it. It has inspired me to try and step up my game.

Thanks, pookie.
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Barzalene

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Re: Twin Ouroboroi - Part One of Two
« Reply #55 on: October 18, 2014, 10:27:38 AM »
My pc had a crush on Darcy. He didn't have the stones to take on Dowan though. And too, he respected Dowan.
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Ghardoan:A pitiful voice rises from the well below, "I've fallen and I can't get up..."